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Anime: K-On
Character: Azusa Nakano by :iconwackelp:
Photo taken by :iconjimmpantsu:
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:iconsmithers456:
WackelP I already posted a comment on your outfit. Looking at this photo again I decided to give a critique for it as well.

Here's my Critique for your Azusa Nakano Cosplay

Cosplayer - The outfit is very nice in general. I Love the shades of blue for the skirt and jacket. It would be nice to see the red bow better. Your hair flip is nice but I don't care as much for the hair in your eyes, I think it makes it harder to see your eyes. I like the serious look on your face, it gives me the impression that you don't want to be messed with or followed.

Background - I Love both the setting and background for this shot. Fall is my favorite season and this location got my attention. The only thing that could make the location better is if you found a place that had more colors for the leaves. The yellow leaves are good but some orange or red leaves would make things look even better. Something to think about for the future. You are focused really well but the blur in the background takes away some from the overall effect. Taking a lot of different angles or shots in general if you hadn't done it at the time could give you some better shots. I do realize that you are "swirling" in the photo so a good focus overall might be more difficult to do.

Overall - I Love the stairs and the fall setting. Appropriate for starting school. Your outfit is wonderful!! You definately look athentic.
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:iconzikwaga:
Zikwaga Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dat Hair! O_O
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:iconwackelp:
WackelP Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
What's it abou the hair? :D
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:iconzikwaga:
Zikwaga Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Looks epic. ;D
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:iconwackelp:
WackelP Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
That's great thank you :D
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:iconmister-23:
Mister-23 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012   Digital Artist
Very cute.
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:iconwackelp:
WackelP Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
Thank you so much :hug:
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:iconkaizer617:
Kaizer617 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
STILL CUTE!!!!:love::deviation:
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:iconwackelp:
WackelP Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
Thank you very very much ^^
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:iconkaizer617:
Kaizer617 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Not a problem!! Hey, may I ask you a question?
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:iconwackelp:
WackelP Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
Sure :)
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:iconkaizer617:
Kaizer617 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Would it be OK for me to draw you in 1 of your cosplays?
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:iconwackelp:
WackelP Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
Sure that's the first time someone asks this but it would be great I can't wait to see it ^^
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:iconkaizer617:
Kaizer617 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
If there 1 you have in mind?
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:iconwackelp:
WackelP Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
Hm I don't know I thought you had a favourite one you'd want to draw ^^
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:iconkaleso:
kaleso Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
Such a lovely photo! :'D I love the movement, and all of the pretty fall leaves~ Your Azusa cosplay is so great. ❤
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:iconwackelp:
WackelP Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
Awwww thank you so much it makes me really happy to hear that :hug:
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:iconkaleso:
kaleso Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
You're very welcome. ^_^ ❤
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:iconsmithers456:
smithers456 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Very nice outfit!! :) I haven't seen the K-ON series yet but one of my first Anime posters is from the series. Beautiful location as well.
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:iconwackelp:
WackelP Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
Thank you so much ^^ You should watch it :) The characters are very cute and even if it's slice of life you never get tired of watching it :) The movie centers in London and they did such great location scouting it's amazing *o*
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:iconsmithers456:
smithers456 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I will definately give the series a try.
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:iconkaizer617:
Kaizer617 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
JUST BEAUTIFUL!!!
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:iconwackelp:
WackelP Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
Thank you so much ^^
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:iconkaizer617:
Kaizer617 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem!! I love the way your hair blows in the wind!
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:iconwackelp:
WackelP Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
It took many tried to get that shot ^^
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:iconkaizer617:
Kaizer617 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm glad you got it! Very beautiful!!
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:iconjade-arts:
jade-arts Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:love: Great cosplay and love the fall leaves too. :heart:
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:iconwackelp:
WackelP Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
Thank you so much :) Yep I love them too every season had something so special :3
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:iconjade-arts:
jade-arts Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome! :aww: That is nice. :w00t:
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:iconramonkun:
Ramonkun Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
amazing cosplay, beautiful photo!! love it.
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:iconwackelp:
WackelP Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
Thank you so much, I'm happy you like it ^^
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